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I Met Him As A Child by ~angellis:iconangellis:





I was once a curious child, before I knew how to be a man. When I needed mother to hold my hand. The many things I wished I could see, they all seemed surreal to me. One thing I now know may not have been so. For as a young one I once did meet a tiny folk. I left my mother’s side for just a second, to look at a frog. He was a small one you see. And in my youth I did find small things to be most divine. I thought I’d be quick, I thought I would have time. My mother dear, bless her soul would often forget that I was there. She would walk without me for yards and yards. Then suddenly she’d double back. I would hear her call to me. Then we would go home in time for tea. This time it was different, this time with the frog. I was with it for hours, waiting for her call. But I could hear nothing at all. It started to get dark, but I was not afraid. I remembered stories of creatures brave. They were small and never gave one little smile. I heard they ate children once in a while. I knew that could not be true. Someone was telling a lie or two. Before I could sit and think of my chances a tiny person came at me wielding two lances. He didn’t come with aggravation, he looked as though in frustration. The next bit was the most bizarre, he made me fly afar. From my lonely home of a few long hours, to my mother’s arms, greatly dowered. He did this with the touch of his hand, how I don’t know. This encounter was brief, I wish it were longer. I hope to see more of him each time I do wander.
©2005-2009 ~angellis
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Author's Comments

One of my many short stories in a series called the Wandering Count. I'm not sure If I will ever think about trying to publishing them. So they may all end up here.
This in particular is one of those little stories that leave alot of the imagery & reasoning up to the reader.

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:iconremaerd:
Well, I'm somewhat confused, but I'll blame that on Starbucks and the stress of beginning an exam in five minutes. I was entertained though, so I'm favoriting it! I like the frog >.>
:iconwordsanonymous:
I love how poetic this is, it basically seems like a story made up of sentence fragments and it's unlike anything I've ever read. You know how sometimes they show you on television how they expect dogs see the world, with a sort of pinched blur around the entirety of what you're viewing? Well, that's exactly how I imagine most of this... and I wonder if I'm more odd for a) that being the case; or b) me admitting that to you. Lol, just awesome, I'm faving. :)

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i don't write like this.
:iconangellis:
thankyou once more. lol, the oddities of this world give it a real sense of life. and I'd go for a & b as being on par with each other :P

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So close to the flame...

Selvmord...
:iconwordsanonymous:
haha, great to know

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i don't write like this.
:iconzeeba96:
very interersting... but beautiful all the same....
like nothing else ive ever read before...
:iconangellis:
Thankyou! I try. :glomp:

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So close to the flame...

Selvmord...
:iconamysart:
OMGS! love it! had me captured from the first word, right to the end! i see others have already said it, but i'll say it again! it is unlike anything i have ever read before!
i love stuff that gives the imagination a good healthy work out...its written so well, i felt like i was watching a short film of it in my head!
nd that wordsanonymous said "You know how sometimes they show you on television how they expect dogs see the world, with a sort of pinched blur around the entirety of what you're viewing? Well, that's exactly how I imagine most of this... " was the same for me!
i wanna read more of "The Wandering Count" series"!!
:iconangellis:
Once again, glad you like it. I was at one stage planning to add the wandering count stuff into my book... Maybe I should? I'll collect them all and once I've organised the manuscript for the book I'll give you a copy :D There's a couple more wandering count things on here I think. :glomp:

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So close to the flame...

Selvmord...

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