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My eyes make me fall deeper
Till I am prepared to burn up
I hold back the words that haunt me
Because they’ll make you more beautiful

I have this dream
A magic dream
Sweet Silt is falling down
You dance around in my crown
& make a mess of my heart

Sleepless and overcome by joy
A perfect day
One that we’ll never have
Because you and I aren’t
Never will be
Never should be
And for some reason that’s fine

Right now things get complicated
Wrong and right aren’t to be reciprocated
And what the hell do you do when you know what is right
But it feels so wrong
Everything you had falls down
Because you, you and you decided you knew what was best?
I know I’ll just give up before I get to that…

Temptation
It burns, it turns me
Into a monster
But I won’t become one
I won’t let you let me let you turn me into…
One of them…
I am better then that…
I will always love you…
©2005-2009 ~angellis
:iconangellis:

Author's Comments

The title is "An indescribable natural compunctious ending with the sacrificing of tomorrow as a uniting activity of love". That won't fit in the title box, so a fitting subtitle is there.
Basically, it is about the thoughts of a member of a forbidden romance. Not sure if that carries out well, but it is and that's what It says to me.

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:iconwordsanonymous:
wow i just love it. that's it, just love it. "Never will be" grabbed me and then didn't let me go. awesome stuff.
:iconangellis:
thankyou very much ;)

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So close to the flame...

Selvmord...
:iconamysart:
ive never been a fan of poetry. but i love the stuff u write! its so engaging, makes you feel like your not just reading about something, like your part of the story. :) i want to read more.. but need sleep..
good night!
:iconangellis:
Glad you like it. I was a little ashamed of it for a while as to some people it didn't really stand out because the writing style is not heavily structured like alot of poems. But that gives it the touch of realism I think. Thoughts aren't really structured as such as far as I know... :glomp:

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So close to the flame...

Selvmord...

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